⚡ Golden rule: 2–3 impressive words per paragraph, woven in naturally. Never force it.
Persuasive Writing
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Opening Starters
Bold Statement
Undeniably, ... / Unquestionably, ... / Without doubt, ...Rhetorical Question
Would you really choose ... over ...? / Can we afford to ignore ...?Dramatic
Every single day, ... / Right now, as you read this, ...Vivid Image
Imagine a world where ... / Picture this: ...Shocking Fact
Studies reveal that ... / Shockingly, research shows ...❌ Never write
"In this essay I will talk about..."💡
Argument Paragraph Starters
Point — 1st
First and foremost, ... / Above all else, ... / The most compelling reason is ...Point — 2nd
Furthermore, ... / In addition to this, ... / Equally important is ...Point — 3rd
Perhaps most significantly, ... / Beyond this, ...Explain
This is because ... / Consequently, ... / The reason is clear:Example
For instance, ... / Research indicates that ... / Consider the case of ...Link Back
Clearly, this demonstrates ... / It is evident that ... / This alone proves ...🥊
Rebuttal Phrases
Introduce other side
Opponents may argue that ... / Some contend that ... / While it is true that ...Dismiss it
However, this argument fails to consider ... / This overlooks the fact that ...Smash it
In reality, ... / On the contrary, ... / The evidence clearly refutes this ...Reinforce
Therefore, it remains undeniable that ... / This only strengthens the case for ...🎯
Conclusion Starters
Restate thesis
In conclusion, it is clear that ... / Ultimately, the evidence is overwhelming ...Call to action
It is time for us to ... / We must act now to ... / Society can no longer afford to ignore ...Thought-provoking
The choice is ours — but the consequences are not.Final line
The question is not whether we can — it is whether we will.💬
Word Upgrades
| ❌ Basic | ✅ NAPLAN-ready |
|---|---|
| good | beneficial / invaluable / advantageous |
| bad | detrimental / devastating / harmful |
| shows | demonstrates / highlights / illustrates |
| important | crucial / paramount / essential |
| says / thinks | contends / asserts / maintains |
| very | significantly / substantially / profoundly |
| big | considerable / immense / substantial |
| change | transform / revolutionise / reshape |
| problem | crisis / dilemma / challenge |
| help | facilitate / support / bolster |
| also | furthermore / additionally / moreover |
| but | however / nevertheless / nonetheless |
| so | therefore / consequently / thus |
| clearly | evidently / undeniably / demonstrably |
| people | individuals / citizens / communities |
| many | numerous / countless / a multitude of |
| because | given that / owing to / on account of |
| wrong | unjust / indefensible / irresponsible |
| stop | cease / eliminate / eradicate / abolish |
| start | initiate / commence / implement |
| try | endeavour / strive / seek to |
| need | require / necessitate / demand |
| use | utilise / employ / implement |
| new | innovative / pioneering / contemporary |
| old | archaic / antiquated / obsolete |
| worse | exacerbated / more detrimental |
| better | superior / more beneficial / enhanced |
| true | accurate / valid / substantiated |
| false | erroneous / unsubstantiated / unfounded |
| fast | swift / expeditious / prompt |
| hard | arduous / demanding / challenging |
| easy | straightforward / effortless / accessible |
| find | identify / uncover / determine |
| keep | preserve / safeguard / sustain |
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Persuasive Techniques
| Technique | What it is | Example |
|---|---|---|
| Rhetorical Q | Makes reader think | Can we really afford to do nothing? |
| Rule of Three | Three words/ideas | Dangerous, irresponsible, inexcusable. |
| Emotive Language | Triggers emotion | Innocent children are suffering. |
| Repetition | Repeats for effect | We need change. Real change. Now. |
| Statistics | Numbers = credibility | 9 in 10 experts agree... |
| Direct Address | Talks to reader | You have the power to change this. |
| Alliteration | Same start sound | Dangerous, destructive, deadly. |
| Anecdote | Short story | Consider a student who... |
| Hyperbole | Exaggeration | We have tried a million times... |
| Expert Opinion | Cite authority | Leading researchers confirm that... |
Narrative Writing
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Strong Verb Swaps
| ❌ Basic | ✅ Vivid alternatives |
|---|---|
| walked | crept / trudged / strode / wandered / shuffled |
| ran | sprinted / bolted / dashed / hurtled / fled |
| said | whispered / demanded / muttered / exclaimed / urged |
| looked | gazed / peered / glanced / stared / surveyed |
| thought | pondered / wondered / realised / contemplated |
| felt | sensed / experienced / endured / perceived |
| saw | noticed / spotted / observed / glimpsed |
| went | ventured / crept toward / slipped / headed |
| got | obtained / acquired / discovered / secured |
| put | placed / positioned / rested / tucked |
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Descriptive Language
Instead of "dark"
pitch-black / shadowy / murky / ink-blackInstead of "scared"
paralysed with fear / heart hammering / blood running coldInstead of "happy"
elated / overjoyed / heart soaring / grinning uncontrollablyInstead of "quiet"
eerily silent / hushed / still as glassInstead of "loud"
deafening / thunderous / ear-splittingInstead of "cold"
biting / bone-chilling / icy / frigidInstead of "beautiful"
breathtaking / radiant / captivatingInstead of "angry"
seething / eyes blazing / jaw clenched⚡
Narrative Sentence Starters
Strong opening
The moment everything changed was ... / Nobody expected what happened next.Build tension
Suddenly, ... / Without warning, ... / In that instant, ...Slow down
Time seemed to stop. / Everything went quiet. / She held her breath.Show don't tell
Her hands trembled. / His jaw tightened.Flashback
It hadn't always been like this. / She thought back to the day when ...Powerful ending
It was only then that she understood. / Some things, once changed, can never go back.🌟
Literary Devices
| Device | What it is | Example |
|---|---|---|
| Simile | Compare using like/as | Her voice was as cold as ice. |
| Metaphor | Say something IS something | The classroom was a prison. |
| Personification | Give objects human traits | The wind howled in protest. |
| Foreshadowing | Hint at what's to come | He didn't know this would be the last time. |
| Short sentences | Create tension | She stopped. Listened. Ran. |
| Sensory detail | Use all 5 senses | The damp smell of rain on concrete... |
Structure Templates
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Persuasive Essay Structure
Opening (2–3 sentences)
Hook → Context → Thesis (your opinion)Argument 1 (4–5 sentences)
Point → Explain → Example → Link back ⭐ Word upgrades hereArgument 2 (4–5 sentences)
Point → Explain → Example → Link back ⭐ Word upgrades hereRebuttal (3–4 sentences)
Acknowledge → Dismiss → ReinforceConclusion (2–3 sentences)
Restate thesis differently → Powerful close⏱ Time tip
5 min plan · 30 min write · 5 min check📋
Narrative Structure
Opening
Hook immediately — start mid-action or with intrigue.Rising action
Introduce a problem. Build tension. Short sentences speed things up.Climax
Most intense moment. Show don't tell. Slow down time here.Falling action
Result of climax. Character reacts or changes.Resolution
End with impact — a realisation, twist, or lingering thought.⏱ Time tip
Plan your ending FIRST — work backwards
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Try:
3x + 5 = 20
Triangle area
35% of 180
Simplify 18/24
Mean of data
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Number & Algebra
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Order of Operations
Rule
BODMASB
Brackets first — always do ( ) firstO
Orders — powers & roots (e.g. 3², √16)D / M
Division & Multiplication — left to rightA / S
Addition & Subtraction — left to rightExample
3 + 4 × 2 = 3 + 8 = 11 (not 14)🔢
Fractions
Multiply
a/b × c/d = ac/bdDivide
a/b ÷ c/d = a/b × d/c (flip & multiply)Add/Sub
Same denominator → add tops. Different → find LCDSimplify
Divide top & bottom by their HCFMixed →
2¾ = (2×4+3)/4 = 11/4Fraction of
3/5 of 40 = 40 ÷ 5 × 3 = 24💯
Percentages
% of amount
% ÷ 100 × amountIncrease by %
amount × (1 + %/100)Decrease by %
amount × (1 − %/100)% change
(change ÷ original) × 100→ decimal
35% = 0.35Example
15% of 240 = 0.15 × 240 = 36⚡
Powers & Roots
Multiply
aᵐ × aⁿ = aᵐ⁺ⁿDivide
aᵐ ÷ aⁿ = aᵐ⁻ⁿZero power
a⁰ = 1Squares
5²=25 · 12²=144Cubes
2³=8 · 3³=27 · 4³=64√ Roots
√144=12 · √81=9 · √25=5🔤
Algebra Basics
Like terms
3x + 5x = 8x only same variablesExpand
3(x + 4) = 3x + 12Factorise
6x + 9 = 3(2x + 3)Solve 1-step
x + 5 = 12 → x = 7Solve 2-step
3x − 4 = 11 → x = 5Substitute
If x=3: 2x² + 1 = 19📊
Ratios & Rates
Simplify ratio
12:8 = 3:2 (divide by HCF)Share in ratio
Total parts → 1 part → multiply eachExample
$60 in 2:3 → 5 parts → $24 : $36Rate
60km in 2hr = 30km/hSpeed
S = D ÷ TMeasurement & Geometry
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Area Formulas
Square
A = s²Rectangle
A = l × wTriangle
A = ½ × b × hParallelogram
A = b × hTrapezium
A = ½(a+b) × hCircle
A = π r²📏
Perimeter & Circumference
Rectangle
P = 2(l + w)Square
P = 4sTriangle
P = a + b + cCircle (C)
C = 2πr = πd📦
Volume
Cube
V = s³Rect. prism
V = l × w × hCylinder
V = π r² hSA of cube
SA = 6s²📐
Angles
Straight line
= 180°Full rotation
= 360°Triangle sum
= 180°Quadrilateral
= 360°Alternate
Equal — Z shape (parallel lines)Co-interior
= 180° — same side, parallel📐
Pythagoras
Rule
a² + b² = c²Find hyp.
c = √(a² + b²)Find side
a = √(c² − b²)Example
3, 4 → c = √(9+16) = 5Common sets
3,4,5 5,12,13 8,15,17🔄
Transformations
Translation
Slide — same shape, new positionReflection
Flip over a mirror lineRotation
Turn around a centre pointCongruent
Same shape AND same sizeSimilar
Same shape, different size (scaled)Statistics & Key Facts
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Averages
Mean
Sum ÷ countMedian
Middle value when sortedMode
Most frequent valueRange
Highest − Lowest🎲
Probability
Formula
P = favourable ÷ totalScale
0 = impossible · 1 = certainComplement
P(not A) = 1 − P(A)🔀
Fraction ↔ Decimal ↔ %
| Fraction | Decimal | % |
|---|---|---|
| 1/2 | 0.5 | 50% |
| 1/4 | 0.25 | 25% |
| 3/4 | 0.75 | 75% |
| 1/3 | 0.333 | 33.3% |
| 1/5 | 0.2 | 20% |
| 1/8 | 0.125 | 12.5% |
| 5/8 | 0.625 | 62.5% |
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Unit Conversions
Length
1km=1000m · 1m=100cm · 1cm=10mmMass
1kg=1000g · 1t=1000kgCapacity
1L=1000mL · 1kL=1000LTime
1min=60s · 1hr=60min · 1day=24hr❌
Common Mistakes
BODMAS
Adding before multiplying without bracketsUnits
Forgetting cm², m³ in answersFractions
Adding denominators instead of finding LCDMedian
Forgetting to sort data firstNegatives
−×− = positive (not negative!)🧠
Exam Strategy
Step 1
Read twice — underline key numbersStep 2
Write the formula first, then substituteStep 3
Show ALL working — partial marks availableStep 4
Check: does answer make sense? Right units?Step 5
Never leave blank — always estimate